User:Maradeleonm/Chakali language/23alexx Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maradeleonm, Rica35, Zbernier12, Nnewm3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maradeleonm/Chakali_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chakali language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead that they have written in the sandbox is coming along very well. The organization of the article is good, they have tables for the consonants and vowels, which I find very helpful seeing as I am a visual person. The tone of the article is very neutral, I don't see any biases or opinions peering through. The article is coming along very nicely!