User:Maradeleonm/Chakali language/MystifiedMysti Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chakali language


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Maradeleonm/Chakali language
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chakali language

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead in the sandbox is good, just make sure the contents mentioned are included in the article or at least the name of those languages like Waali and Bulengi are hyperlinked. Also make sure all the references used are added as I see that the first reference is not added to the article yet.

Other than phonology and grammar (although more could be added to the grammar section), I see potential for sections on the language's history, and maybe something more on its geographic distribution as mentioned in the lead. There's also potential for adding images.

There are some sentences under the phonology section that needs citation.

If possible, the native speaker row on the top right corner of the article could be updated. Not sure if the 3,500 individuals mentioned in the lead of the sandbox are native speakers, but if they are, and the data is recent, that row definitely needs some updating. If the number in that row still holds true, the lead needs to be updated to include those 6,000 native speakers. Here are some words that I think could be linked to their respective wiki pages: vowels and minimal pairs.