User:Maradeleonm/Ecuadorian Siona/Nataliawrobel3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maradeleonm, Sote2, Jmarie1, Coolisschool123, 23alexx


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maradeleonm/Ecuadorian_Siona?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecuadorian Siona

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

One of the strongest qualities of the draft is the amount of information provided about the history and geography of the Ecuadorian Siona language. The information is neutral in the sense that it is unbiased and focuses solely on the facts. The only critic I have of all this information is the lack of sources and citations, which would strengthen the credibility and information in the article. This is especially needed when the historical dates and facts come into play, which can be easily mistaken or misleading. One confusing thing about the draft is the repetition of the top paragraph and the article body paragraph since it contains the same information. Additionally, there seems to be a section that is copied from the original Ecuadorian Siona language Wiki page that might be flagged as plagiarism, which I would recommend eliminating. Overall a good job on the draft, I would just recommend adding more citations for the information your group provides.