User:Maradeleonm/Ecuadorian Siona/SonaniVandan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sote2, Jmarie1, Coolisschool123, 23alexx, IntrepidError


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maradeleonm/Ecuadorian_Siona?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecuadorian Siona

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The organization of the article is currently well written, from the overall description of the language as a whole to the history and into the phonology. Some sentences within the history portions still need to be cited still. Tone and balance is kept to a minimum, while reading through the article, I didn't specifically notice any biased swaying towards one side. The lead also is kept concise, containing simply a short summary of the Ecuadorian Siona language. Currently, the information added from the article draft helps add more information of the background of the language possibly add some extra phonology information about the language.