User:MarahiMadrid/Discriminatrion resulting from political policies and rhetoric/Equijas Peer Review

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Lead

The lead has a great opening sentence that details what the page will be about. The lead is concise and brief to the point. It summarizes what the article will be about.

Content

The content added is relevant to the topic and it is up to date with facts. The content is relevant to the article. She wrote about statistics during Donald Trump presidency term. She also stated the way our previous president directed himself and thought about minority groups to be specific about Mexicans which he called illegal immigrants.

Tone and Balance

The content is mostly neutral. A few content appears more biased toward a particular position. I suggest adding people's opinion about Donald Trump as a president from different races to be more biased.

Sources and references

Sources are clearly stated after a piece of information and references are cited at the bottom of the article. She has six references which is a good amount. Sources are current and reliable. I tried clicking a few and they work.

Organization

The article is well organized and covers the topic with supporting details in each paragraph. It is broken down into sections. Idid not see any errors.

Images and Media

This wikipedia page does not include any images or media yet.

For New Articles

The article meets wikipedia's requirements. It has a good number os reliable sources and the links provide additional information about the topic.

Overall Impressions

This article has good quality and interesting information that helps understand and be more familiar with the topic. The strengths are the facts because it supports the main topic of the article. I suggest to adding more content from an unbiased source will improve the article's content.