User:MarcelaCurcio/Marrus orthocanna/Jblythe.bc22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryanburns22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MarcelaCurcio/Marrus orthocanna
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Some of the information in the initial paragraph could be relocated to different sections within the article. A couple of the sentences mention life cycle and distribution, which could be moved to the lower sections. The preliminary structure of the article looks great! I think you could use a section for reproduction/life cycle, or you could add that into the biology section. Looking good so far.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

jasminelee414


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:MarcelaCurcio/Marrus_orthocanna&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Addition of the "History" section was a nice touch to show how knowledge of the organism has evolved over time. Adding some information about the ecology of the organism would be interesting, showing how it interacts with other organisms, or if it doesn't. The work you guys have been doing is great so far!