User:MarcelaCurcio/Marrus orthocanna/Kjeag11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jasminelee414


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MarcelaCurcio/Marrus_orthocanna?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marrus orthocanna

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: There is a solid lead that covers a brief description of morphology, biology, and distribution of the animal. The lead is also concise with 3-4 sentences. I am curious what is meant by "colonial creature."

Content and Organization: The added content is relevant to topic especially on expanding on previous sections. One suggestion about the organization of the article is maybe moving history earlier on in the article to provide more background before moving into distribution and habitat. The added content also has a neutral tone while remaining concise and relevant. I know for next steps the group hopes to continue and expand sources, but the added material comes from reliable and published research articles. Some of the links on the already published article like citation 7 go to a "webpage not found." In the sandbox section of the article there also seems to be a repeat citation for 6 and 7 within the reference section. The image included on the published article page is particularly striking.

Overall the content adds helpful and informative information! Look forward to reading more about Marrus orthocanna with final edits.