User:Marcellemcadoo/Sport management/Farrahmarie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marcellemcadoo, Sean4or, Njbussiere, Colincostello22, Phfabbri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marcellemcadoo/Sport_management?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport management

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a good start! These paragraphs are looking pretty professional with the citations and everything. I think the introduction of sports marketing and discussing how colleges have introduced the program is relevant too to Quinnipiac's own programs. Also citing the origin and how sports management came from physical education, history and sociology shows the ways that Wikipedia articles can also become linked to one another. Overall its looking pretty good, just a bit more to go!