User:Marcellemcadoo/Sport management/Jatargove Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like the lead could be a little longer and maybe that would draw more people in. However, I do like the brief description, it is short and to the point.

The content is very neutral and it seems up to date. I like how the "Jobs" section included a lot of options under the Sport Management profession.

Maybe add some more references so the article seems more reliable and credible.

It is well written and easy to read, but maybe add more to the sections so individuals who read this article can get a better understanding.