User:Margaret UW-Madison/Charles L. Manson House/RaichelleA Peer Review

The lead is the only thing you have up so far so I will only comment on that.

I do not know what the square unit system. It would be nice to have an external Wikipedia link to a page with an explanation or you can just insert a brief sentence. ￼

This sentence is confusing:

However, the strong horizontal line of the house descending three levels down the sloping wooded lot has the silhouette of Wright's Prairie School houses.

Is it possible to break it into two sentences. I think the phrase "sloping wooded lot" is what is throwing me off. What does it mean? ￼

I love the photo of correspondence!

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