User:MargoBP1/Ecoflation/Naomitrott Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Good intro, it provides an thorough description of ecoflation and overview a topic I am not too familiar with. Overall, your article is well structured and supported by your sources (p.s. love the use of "portmanteau").

Some suggestions:


 * In the "Consumers" subsection - I think you could add something about how demand-side pressures for greener/more environmentally friendly products and goods are more expensive, so as to link it back to ecoflation explicitly
 * Are there any specific examples that could be provided in the "Business Opportunities" and "Big Changes" subsections? These seem a little vague and could benefit from more concrete examples of how corporations/companies are addressing ecoflation.
 * The "Impacts of ecoflation on cost drivers" section - maybe provide a bit more of an introduction for the study/scenario you are discussing to give the reader some more context. Also, could these impacts be expanded and supported by other sources?

A couple REALLY small things:


 * some of your headings/subheadings have the first letter capitalized ("Addressing Ecoflation") and some do not ("Impacts of ecoflation on cost drivers"). I suggest sticking to one or the other to keep it consistent
 * wiki automatically numbers your headings/sub-headings, so no need to number yours!

Good work :)