User:Maria.ambriz/Ruth Darwin/Breahmckay Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maria.ambriz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Maria.ambriz/Ruth Darwin


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ruth Darwin

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the first article, it seems that there is not much information on Darwin. It is good how you included some new information that you found to add to the article but you need to make a clear leading sentence and section. You seem to just jump straight into the facts!