User:Maria.arriaga22/sandbox

Some responses that I received from my peers in my group were very helpful. I wanted to name a few of those responses that I received: - I provided a clear and more detailed explanation of the diathesis-stress hypothesis. (Raven) - Lead was good, but adding hyperlinks on each disorder that is named was needed. (Kayla) - Was suggested to add more sources because there was only one.(Kayla) - Was suggested on expanding the sort of research being done to further test the disorders. (Komal) - Needed more information about each disorder and provide more detail. (Ri'Sheba) - Was suggested to do more research to provide context in terms of how genes increase the risk of an individual developing an stress-related disorder comparing to an individual who doesn't have the genetics.(Yi)

Summary Statement: For the lead section I see that I needed to add a citation that was missing after the first sentence. I opt to this change because I actually wrote this sentence myself so I don't have any citation to put there. I did make spelling changes and capitalized the words Depression and Trauma. I went back and also did a few capitalization changes for words like Anxiety, Depression, Disorder, and Schizophrenia. I also added some information to my lead. I was unable to find another resource mostly because I didn't have time to find any but I was continue to look for another source to add.