User:Marialobatograbowsky/United Nations Operation in Mozambique/Werickson.31 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marialobatograbowsky


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marialobatograbowsky/United_Nations_Operation_in_Mozambique?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * United Nations Operation in Mozambique

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I was generally very impressed with your article- both in terms of the amount of content you were able to add and in terms of the relevance/interest of what you added- great work!! The only feedback I'd give is potentially expanding on the political component of the mission if able, but I understand that may be hard considering the vagueness of that section.

Additional feedback: One thing that I think you could do, pretty easily, to benefit your article would be add more hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles. For example, you mention the "Eastern Bloc" in the first non-introductory paragraph and it could help readers who don't necessarily know much history if you added a hyperlink to Eastern Bloc (could also be done for Rhodesia, Bretton Woods, etc.). Another interesting addition could be maps to aid the reader when you reference the areas of control of Frelimo and Renamo. I was also very impressed by your scholarly sourcing!