User:Mariam Shadad/Disaggregated Data/Kaitlinabeele Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mariam Shadad


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mariam%20Shadad/Disaggregated_Data?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
First off, there seems to be discrepancies and how you've spelt disaggregated. There are also several other spelling/spacing issues. I would suggest running your article through a spell checker to help solve the issue.

The final sentence in your introduction should be split into two separate sentences like this: "Contrastingly, aggregate data consists of data compiled into a single source to better track general patterns. A common example would be standardized testing."

This sentence that you quote could perhaps be rewritten and cited rather than a direct quote: "This refers to the process of "combining aggregate data (AgD) results from publications. As such, meta-regression most commonly consists of conducting linear regression of the study results as a function of an effect modifier, both in the aggregate."

I would restructure this sentence: "Disaggregated Data looks at the smaller picture of a larger concept, it can be utilized in any study that has multiple variables" by removing the comma. It should read "Disaggregated Data looks at the smaller picture of a larger concept and can be utilized in any study that has multiple variables."

Overall, you're off to a good start, but there are some critical spelling and grammatical errors that need to be addressed. You have a solid list of references that meet the Notability requirements for Wikipedia. The tone of the writing is effective and concise. However, it seems like you are still working on the article, and therefore some information and context is missing. You should also consider what graphics you will select to help illustrate points found in your article.