User:Mariam Shadad/Disaggregated Data/Naanjee44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Mariam Shadad)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Reviews

 * Does a good job at defining the concept. Goes straight into defining the concept disaggregated data
 * There is an introductory sentence that describes the article’s topic. However, the lead needs to include a brief description of the article’s major sections
 * The content has some spelling errors
 * The article has been broken down into sections that show the major points of the topics.
 * Some of the major points are still work in progress. I am looking forward to reading them
 * The sources reflect the available literature on the topic