User:Mariamoo333/Into the Forest/Hunterelizabethhill Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@MariaMoo333


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * @MariaMoo333's article
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Into the Forest

Evaluate the drafted changes
not much added yet and I am not sure where some of the added information will end up. what is added looks great and is well refined.