User:Mariana Madera/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Big Baller Brand

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this this article because i have been following this family for years now. Not only am i interested because of the fact that it is relevant in the sports world but also because i have seen this business go world wide and i have even seen their business collapse in the last couple of years. My first impression of this article was that the basic information was well covered, however i don't know what more that could be added to improve it.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is very simple and concise. I believe the introductory sentence clearly describes the article's topics without having any distractions which is very effective. All of the content in this article is relevant and up to date. This brand has put efforts into so many things and even though it's known for things more than others this page includes all parts of the brand and in an equal way. This article definitely has a neutral tone, especially knowing what LaVar Ball (founder) thinks about his brand, this article does a great job of keeping a neutral tone. However, there was a section where it talks about how this brand has a grade F in the business world, but if it is a fact i think it still falls under having a neutral tone. There are many reliable sources that this article includes, i clicked on many links and they were in fact reliable. One thing i realized was that the sources are all fairly similar but because of the topic i think it makes sense that there aren't any textbook resources. This article was well written and organized which made it fairly easy to navigate through the article. This article says how much the brothers are the face of this brand so i believe there should be an image on this page of the family or at least the three sons, who this brand is built around. This article in fact are within the WikiProject companies, and most of the talk page is about if this business can be considered serving consumers worldwide when in reality not every single country in the world has the opportunity to consume from this brand. Overall i think this article is done well but there are a few minor touch ups that can be done. Some of its strengths would be how concise the content and layout is and some things that can be improved are showing a little bit more about the ball brothers to show that this brand is built around them. I believe this article's completeness is underdeveloped but i would have a hard time on figuring out exactly what to add to benefit the article.