User:Marianna.willobe/Dessa Rose/Annacaroline01 Peer Review

General info
Marianna.willobe
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Marianna.willobe/Dessa Rose
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Dessa Rose

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:
Has the lead been updated?

Lead has not been updated from the original page.

Does the lead include an introduction to the subject?

Yes, the lead includes a good introduction to the novel.

Is the Lead concise?

Yes, the lead is concise.

Content:
Is the content added relevant to the topic?

Yes, the content added discusses necessary details that allow the reader a deeper understanding of the text.

Is the content added up-to-date?

Yes, the content added is current and correct.

Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

No, but to add more information a themes section could be added!

Is the content added neutral?

Yes, the content added is from a neutral viewpoint with no bias.

Are there any claims that seem heavily biased toward a particular position?

No.

Organization:
Is the content added well written?

Yes, the content is clear and grammatically correct.

Does the content have any grammatical or spelling errors?

No, the content is grammatical correct.

Is the content added well-organized?

Yes, the sections are well titled and offer a good description of each section. More sections could be added such as themes, critics reviews, etc.

Overall Impressions:
Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article?

Yes, the additions add necessary plot details that are crucial to understanding the novel. The additions in the historical context section also add more details that help to understand the historical events that inspired this text.

What are the strengths of the content added?

The additions are well-detailed and clear to read. The new sentences add information that is crucial to the plot line of the novel.

How can the content added be improved?

In order to improve this article, I would just add more information. There are a couple sections that could be added to this page that will allow an even deeper understanding of the text.