User:Mariavaron14/Depression in childhood and adolescence/Ajohnson2016 Peer Review

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Marionvaron14
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mariavaron14/Depression_in_childhood_and_adolescence?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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When looking at the sandbox, I can get a feel for some things that the article talks about, and it's focus. Since it is just a sandbox, there is a lot of information that could be added. I like that you have the idea to add more information from recent years, with the intention of making information more accurate and up-to-date. I think you could definitely add stats from different kinds of studies, and maybe even compare the depression of certain groups from different sources. It's nice that you have multiple sources referenced, and that you aren't getting all your information from one place.