User:MariiMarii28/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
( Eyjafjallajökull)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
( I chose this article because I wanted to read about a interesting landform so I picked glaciers. It's important to me because currently we are experiencing global warming and the ice caps and glaciers are melting away, in fact, New Orleans will be completely under water in the next few years to to the ice caps and glaciers melting.On the other hand, the overall article started off very well and gave me a factual reading of how this ice cap is melting and the volcano it was on started erupting .)~

Evaluate the article
(This article to me has multiple problems but, it is also well written. In the beginning, the author starts to write about how to pronounce the name and starts to describe the location and the meaning of ice cap. The beginning, however, is very misleading because it talks about the ice cap on a volcano called Eyjafjallajökull but, the article it's self is on the volcano only. Therefore it is either the author changes the name and the introduction or, they could change the whole article and read more into the ice cap. However, the body paragraphs are set up perfectly and the language used in the article is professional, neutral, and not opinionated. Also the way the body paragraphs are set up are correct and chronological. Although, the article is misleading due to the fact the writer overdressed about the volcano it's self. I also took a look at the talk page and many editors have requested the writer to update the year the volcano erupted in 2010 due to it not aging well. Moreover, the pictures and links are very helpful and flow well with the article but, the initial article was about the ice cap. I feel like the writer should have talked more about how the ice cap could damage it's surrounds if it melts and how long it's been there etc... )~