User:Marimend/Virgin cleansing myth/Jennysaensouk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marimend


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marimend/Virgin_cleansing_myth?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Virgin cleansing myth

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The user added relevant information that related to the original article. I would love to see some hyper-links added though, to clarify what some words or key concepts mean and how they tie in with the article.

There were only a few sentences added to the Sandbox, so I cannot review much of the article.