User:Marinati55/Compulsory sterilization/Aaa564 Peer Review

General info
Compulsory sterilization article
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Marinati55/Compulsory sterilization
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information is extremely relevant and definitely needs to be added to the existing article. I only reviewed the first two sections on Bolivia and Nigeria. The section on Bolivia was informative. I did get a little confused during the first two paragraphs. I think having shorter sentences may help. The section on Nigeria is really strong. I think non-consensual should have a hyphen. Again, I think shorter sentences may be helpful for some of the sentences that run on. Otherwise, I really like the draft and what you are adding!