User:Marinati55/Compulsory sterilization/Bmg100 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Marinati55/Compulsory sterilization
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Compulsory sterilization

Evaluate the drafted changes
South Africa section:

Avoid redundancy in the first couple of sentences and make sure to provide sources for them.

I feel like the paragraph ends slightly abruptly. Maybe include some more information about how women with HIV in South Africa have compelled to consent to sterilization to receive various incentives.

Japan section:

"Recently overturned in 2025". I assume that 2025 is a typo.