User:Marinluxgrant/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because I think that Andy Schor, the major of Lansing, has led a very successful and inspiring journey, however, his Wikipedia age lacks with information that encompasses his milestones. By evaluating this article I will be able to identify the areas in which more information could be given to improve others research in the future.

Evaluate the article
When examining the article I can conclude that all areas lack information. However, the area in which could use the most improvement would be the lead section. The article covers the surface of who and what Andy Schor does, but does not provide detail or updates on issues that he is currently working to solve or developments in Lansing, Michigan that are underway. I think that by providing not only more information in the lead section, but all sections, the Lansing community and future majors will be able to stay updated and be inspired by Major Schor's hard work.