User:Mariocartlover/Prytania Street/Laeh101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mariocartlover


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mariocartlover/Prytania Street


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Mariocartlover, I have really enjoyed reading what you have so far of your article. You have a lot of good content and I can tell you have done a lot of research. Your lead is really good and does a great job summarizing what you are going to discuss in your article. Make sure when you write the rest of the article you keep the focus similar to the one of your lead. You have a lot of good content and I would love to see you go more in depth for each of the facts you included in your article. You did an amazing job of staying neutral throughout the entire article but make sure you balance the amount of information about your topic. As you keep editing you also might want to find a more clear structure and organization so that the reader will be able to easily read it. Also do not forget to add your bibliography and images to your article. Overall I think this is a great start to your article and I cannot wait to see the final results!