User:Mariocartlover/Prytania Street/MHD2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mariocartlover


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mariocartlover/Prytania Street


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section is very detailed on the location of Prytania Street as well as its features. I think some of the sentences can be combined to make it run smoother and less choppy. While the features on the street are important, I think you can remove them from the lead section and create a separate section describing its features and attractions.

The content added is relevant to the article. I noticed that you said Prytania Street is "known for its grand architecture, its wide history, and its unique garden" but you don't seem to expand upon that later in the article. I think you should add more information pertaining to these matters.

The content is overall neutral when presenting information.

The article does not contain any citations or a reference page, so they should be added.

Although the information is concise, the article lacks structure. Instead of separating the sentences following the lead paragraph, you can combine them when they pertain to the same topic. For example, you could combine the sentences describing the establishments located on the street. With each new topic, you could add a heading to better organize your article, such as putting a heading for its features and then separate subheadings for the restaurants and hotels. I've also noticed that you said "Creole Creamy" is located on this street, but it is called Creole Creamery.

It seems redundant to say "It has....". You could instead try to add variety to your sentences. You could also remove "Prytania Street ends at Audubon Park" because this fact is already established in the second sentence of your lead.

There are no images for this article. You can try to include a picture of the street or one of its restaurants.

Overall, I think you did a good job at laying out the foundation for your article!