User:Mariposa41324/English studies/TheRevenantTwo Peer Review

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Mariposa41324
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes made here go a long way towards helping the article read in a more professional manner. Some of the language used in the original article read too casually and the edits do a lot to remedy that. Changing "other less intuitive job options include" to "other career opportunities include" is a significant decision because the original statement includes a negative bias towards the subsequent professions listed. I agree that the last sentence of the "Europe" section is redundant, as the sentiment is implied by the statistic that precedes it.