User:Marisajm/sandbox

Performance

The audience is a little difficult for me to pinpoint, but the article overall aims to define characteristics of a performance and give insight on the history of it. Since the article does not have much history of edits to it, that could be the reason why there isn’t a clear audience. I think adding other key factors such as modern adaptations and different aspects of performance could make the article much better. I do worry a bit about adding content that others may see as not fit.

Evergreen

The purpose and audience of this article are beginners wanting to know what an “evergreen” is. The structure of the article is pretty good, but there are some dramatic errors and need for filling in content. It compares to similar articles by not having as much content for that particular plant, and rather gives many hyperlinks to other plants. That is not a bad thing per se, but when there is not much information at the topic at hand, then it could be an issue.

I think I need to work on compiling information that I think is important and integrating it into the article. I need to make sure I am not stepping on any toes, but still providing substantial and copy edits that improve the article.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meadow

Issues with this article:


 * The sentence structure is off; very wordy sentences
 * There is a lack of citations
 * The organization isn’t horrible, but there could definitely be some changes when it comes to the order

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Juice

Issues with this article:


 * There is a lot of repetition and grammatical errors
 * Some of the headings don’t have much information to them
 * The photos that are displayed could have been reviewed

Five articles:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chicken_nugget

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Performance

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evergreen

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trash-talk

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jazz_Age

My top two picks (without your feedback yet) are evergreen and performance. I really want to do chicken nugget but there were some locked stuff on it, bu pleaset let me know what you think!