User:Marisajones/Boston cream doughnut/Madi.heisterman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Marisajones
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Marisajones/Boston cream doughnut

Lead
I think this article has a great lead. It is very detailed and informative. The introductory sentence is very descriptive and tells the reader exactly what the Boston Cream Donut is. There is no sub category in the article but the lead has done a great job providing the history of the donut and its origins.

Content
I love the content, when you search up a donut I don't think anyone expects to find out there is so much history behind a sweet treat. The information about Massachusetts wanting it to be the official state donut is great! The body of the text has so much information on the history of the donut and how it has become political in some cases. This really draws in the readers.

Tone and Balance
The tone is well thought out and clear while being non bias.

Sources and References
A nice range of sources and in-text links to other pages to engage readers farther if they would like. My only suggestion would be to find some more scholarly sources as many of the added articles I have never heard of the publications. I understand it is probably difficult to find a lot of sources on the Boston Cream Donut though.

Organization
Article has a really nice and clear layout and is well organized. I think the article could have been broken up into a lead and then the paragraph that talks about the history of the donut could be another sub category called "History".

Images and Media
Great image shows donuts appearance well.

Overall impressions
Overall I really like the article. I loved learning about the history of the donut and how Massachusetts fights over it being there state donut. The article also made me hungry and wanting to go buy a Boston Cream Donut!