User:MarissaGrosz/Electron-withdrawing group/LegoMagneto Peer Review

General info
MarissaGrosz, JustAnotherInternetUser, Moya.priroda
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:MarissaGrosz/Electron-withdrawing group
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Electron-withdrawing group:

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I like how the beginning is formatted as a paragraph with hyperlinks, rather than as a list like it is on the current wiki page

- lots of good sources

- I like how there is a section talking about the effects on other compounds

- It may be valuable to add examples of good EWGs, okay EWGs, and poor EWGs (possibly in a table format)

- Since wiki is for a general audience in the "Effect on a Benzene Ring" portion possibly add an image (or hyperlink) describing what a meta substitution is.