User:MarissaGrosz/Electron-withdrawing group/User19228 Peer Review

General info
MarissaGrosz, JustAnotherInternetUser, Moya.priroda
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:MarissaGrosz/Electron-withdrawing group
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Electron-withdrawing group

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The original article is very underdeveloped and has little information, so very good job at adding efficient information.

- The information added is relevant to the topic and well written.

- Everything is organized in a clear and logical order.

- Perhaps you can try to make the transitions between each sections smoother and connect them a bit more.

- Perhaps images can be added to supplement explanations. The use of visual aids can be useful for readers who are not familiar with some of the chemical structures and information mentioned.

- All the sources look good and current. Good use of numerous sources to support the article.

- Overall your addition greatly improved the quality of the article.