User:Marissarp/Lake Constance/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Marissa,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 377 and you have 5 refs (all scientific articles). Because of the shortness I will have to doc you a point however because of your circumstance I will not take off any late points.

Your current writing is very good and adds what the current page is lacking. However I would lie to see more linking of terms and you need to cite your references in the text. Also I would start to switch gears towards the mandatory 4 current research paragraphs. If you need help finding sources for that please let me know.

-Katie

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