User:MarlaGuerra/Mexico–United States border crisis/Amanzo2 Peer Review

General info
MarlaGuerra
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MarlaGuerra/Mexico–United States border crisis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mexico–United States border crisis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Marla! Overall I think your proposed changes would be worthwhile and will add more detail, depth, and updated information to this topic. Adding citations and cleaning up the lead is a good start and is very helpful. Your proposed changes throughout the body are also a good plan especially including updated statistics. I think things are always changing so quickly in regards to border policy especially for the southern border so its helpful to try to provide updated information! For the sections that discuss the different administrations you could possibly include a new section with recent scholarship or reports on the Biden administration. I think the sources you have collected so far is a good start! I recently did a research paper so I can recommend two books that discuss change in border policy beginning in 1993-1994 that began harsher policing and surveillance strategies that has subsequently led to more deaths at the border, check these out if they could be of use to you! I listed them below


 * Joseph Nevin’s book “Operation Gatekeeper and Beyond: The War on Illegals and the Remaking of the U. S. - Mexico Boundary”
 * Nevins, Joseph. (2010). Operation Gatekeeper and Beyond: The War on Illegals and the Remaking of the U.S. - Mexico Boundary. Taylor & Francis Group. ProQuest Ebook Central, https://ebookcentral.proquest.com/lib/gwu/detail.action?docID=534234.
 * Timothy Dunn “Blockading the Border and Human Rights The El Paso Operation That Remade Immigration Enforcement”
 * Dunn, T. J. (2009). Blockading the Border and Human Rights the El Paso Operation that Remade Immigration Enforcement (1st ed.). University of Texas Press. https://doi.org/10.7560/719019