User:Marleekochman24/College Basketball/Yjldc Peer Review

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Hello, so far your adjustments are off to a good start! I like how you are referencing both men and women’s basketball leagues. The references you have in the bibliography are used appropriately with your sandbox draft. Your phrasing and word choice seem to match with Wikipedia’s standards which is good. I think what you can do to improve your article is provide more in-text citations. It help prove the facts of what it is you are writing about. Even though they are referenced in the bibliography, it may be better to also add some in the actual text. I can learn form your article in a way. Overall, I think you are off to a good start with misspelling words and even transitioning your article.