User:Marlem J./Sikkimese language/Llill2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marlem J., Jlia22, Liannp, Iur444


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sikkimese language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, I think you guys are making really good progress in your article and sandbox. Your sandbox draft is really well done and has a lot of good information in it. I would try to see if you could incorporate more of that information in the main article. I think one thing that could be improved on in the main article is adding more information in the lead section. For example, maybe you guys could include information on the history of the Sikkimese language, how many speakers there are present day, or stuff along those lines. Also, I think it would be a good idea to incorporate some information about the grammar and syntax of the language. The content in the main article and sandbox is well organized and has a neutral tone, which is good. Once again, you guys have done a really good job on the sandbox and the article, and remember to keep on contributing to both of them and moving the stuff from the sandbox to the main article.