User:Marlem J./Sikkimese language/SPLL Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marlem J., Jlia2, Liannp, lur444


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marlem%20J./Sikkimese_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sikkimese language

Evaluate the drafted changes
You all are off to a great start! One advantage you all have is that the main article doesn't have a ton of information already on there, so that gives you all the opportunity to write about a variety of different topics. Something that you all have in the article that we currently don't have is a section about the differences in spoken and written language. Something you all can add and talk about in your article are sections regarding the history of that language, language examples (sentences in English that are translated into Sikkimese), and grammar. The lead on the article has no edits, it can use some work but it might be better to allocate that time to adding more new content and sections in the article. I think you can add some more information regarding dialectal variation. There is no bias in this draft which is good. All the sources present are good sources, but there are only a few of them and also only a few citations. Overall, you all did a great job explaining the different topics in your own words and the information present is relevant. There is not much in the article already so you can talk about whatever you want and all of the information in the draft are all good pieces of information that can be used in the article.