User:Marlem J./Sikkimese language/Softstarkid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

marlem, jlia22, liannp, lurr444


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marlem%20J./Sikkimese_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sikkimese language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

the phonology introduction is very detailed and adds useful information about the theory of the language's grammar which is useful when putting it into practice.

I would go so far to say that the information is up-to-date and relevant. I think that all the information provided belongs to the article considering it's all about the sikkimese language. also, considering the fact that sikkimese probably belongs to a group of underrepresented people it probably does fulfill the equity gap.

the information provided is written with a very neutral tone that is easy to understand. there is not any attempts of trying to persuade the reader one way or the other.

taking into account the resources provided by dr. hallett and looking at the references list, i am confident in saying that the sources are reliable, accurately reflected, current, and thorough. under the references section there is also a spot labeled further reading which suggests there is sufficient literature on the topic. all the links work except for the first listed further reading link "the grammar of dzongkha."

it is broken down and organized very efficiently. no spelling errors to my knowledge.

no media to comment on.

not a new article.

i believe that the quality of the article was drastically improved due to the research and information added.