User:Marlem J./Sikkimese language/Umnawahal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marlem J./Sikkimese language


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marlem%20J./Sikkimese_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the main content looks decent overall. The article's information is objective and well-structured. Everything was really simple to comprehend, clearly written, and well-structured in the phonology portion, which I really appreciated how you organized. If you could create a table with all the data you gave, I think it would be even cooler. You did an excellent job of providing accurate and understandable citations to your texts. One area the article could be improved on is by talking more about language itself in a none grammar, and its history. let me know if you have any questions but great job :)