User:Marlem J./Sikkimese language/Wsehwail Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marlem J., Jlia22, Liannp, Iur444


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sikkimese language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

While looking over the article, there were a few things that stand out to me in terms of what is missing from the relevant information. There should be more on the variations on the Sikkimese language between all the places that speak it, like how it changes with the local dialects with examples to show the reader what those variations look like. The phonology chart looks someone incomplete with some of it appearing to have not been updated since 2005 but this could just be a mistake on my part. There should be more backstory on the language and how it was created as well as more general information from different references.