User:Marlem J./Sikkimese language/Zabdu2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marlem J., Jlia22, Liannp, Iur444


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Marlem J./Sikkimese language
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sikkimese language

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I would say that introducing the phonology aspect of the Sikkimese language was very well developed. You added proper evidence and proper explanation for most of the sections you guys edited, but I would recommend not adding a lot of information and keeping it simple to not confuse the reader. As for consonants, you should add more information, add brief examples and reasons on why glottal does not have words initially, and you would transition to your full explanation of what glottal is but if there are issues finding references try looking for sources in google scholar.