User:MarleyMae21/Evolution of the Sacbrood Virus/BelleKahlua Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MarleyMae21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MarleyMae21/Evolution of the Sacbrood Virus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:MarleyMae21/Evolution of the Sacbrood Virus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Great lead section!! It was clear and to the point but also had enough detail to where I knew what to expect in the rest of the article. If I had to make one suggestion at the very end I would add a sentence talking about the recent advances since it is your last section of the article.

Content: The content was relevant and definitely explained/added to the topic of this article. The content was up to date and even referenced recent research studies and their conclusions. I don't think there is any content missing. I left a few comments on the article of rewording, grammar, adding in wiki links for terms that might not be known, etc. I think the one thing I absolutely would do is add some cool pictures to supplement the article. This is such an interesting topic I think there are lots of options as to what graphics you decide to add.

Tone/Balance: The tone was neutral and didn't seem to try and persuade readers in any direction. I also don't think any viewpoints were over or underrepresented.

Sources: There is a wide range of sources but seem to have a good amount of new up to date information. I think the sources and the information was appropriate for this article.

Organization: The lead section set up the organization of this article well. and the sections along with subjections were appropriately broken up but yet still flowed very well through the entire reading of the article.

Overall I think this article is super cool and informative. I think it can be understood by the general public which is a huge advantage! Great job!!!!