User:MarleyMae21/Evolution of the Sacbrood Virus/Zafallen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:MarleyMae21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MarleyMae21/Evolution of the Sacbrood Virus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:MarleyMae21/Evolution of the Sacbrood Virus

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

All information presented in the article is relevant to the topic. The lead section was strong and clearly gave the reader enough background information to clearly understand and interrupt the rest of the article. The article is written from a neutral standpoint and the views are clearly represented. Citations were used appropriately and follow all factual information. References are from unbiased reliable sources and all links are in working order. To make this article standout more, I would add photographs of the virus, phylogenetics, and honey bees. My only other suggestion would to be to add significance for the reader. How does understanding the evolution of SBV help honeybees in anyway?