User:Marley C T/Deafness in South Korea/Tennisplayer56 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marley C T


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Deafness in South Korea


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Language Emergence
The info you have here is very good!

Significant Organizations
The info for the KAD is very detailed. Are there any other organizations in South Korea for the deaf, or is it just this one?

Human/Civil Rights
This section was very thorough and had a lot of great info!

Early Hearing Detection and Intervention
You say that South Korea has been conducting hearing screenings and evaluations since 2007, does this mean they have an established UNHS program?

Other notes
This was very detailed and well-written! You seem to have a very extensive list of reliable sources, which is good, and the overall tone of the article remained neutral. Great work!