User:Marleywdunn/Color psychology/Asherm4802 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Marleywdunn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Marleywdunn/Color_psychology&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no
 * Color psychology Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am not exactly sure if the "Influence of color on perception" is the lead paragraph or if that is just where the edits begin. I think the paragraph does a great job of explaining trichromatic color vision and is well balanced. I would suggest adding a leading paragraph that explains what Art psychology is and how color perception and art therapy relate to it. There are not any images, but I understand this is just the beginning of our writing process, but you could possibly use an image of two food items side by side with different color schemes to show how the color of the packaging can affect a persons perception of the item itself. Overall I think this is a great start to the article!