User:Marperch/Italian Synagogue (Venice)/Clenakev Peer Review

General info
User:Marperch
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Marperch/Italian Synagogue (Venice)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Italian Synagogue (Venice)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

- the lead needs updating to reflect the new content

- the lead is incredibly vague and short, perhaps needing a bit more of an extension in content and breakdown of the article's sections

Content

- the content is relevant, up to date, and deals with the equity gap of exploring parts of the Jewish minority in Venice

Tone and Balance

- the draft is very neutral with no issues in this regard

Sources and References

- no sources are given for this information. The sentences all need reliable secondary source citations

Organization

- Generally well written, but the second paragraph for interior feels repetitive from the first paragraph. Maybe find a way to rephrase or perhaps combine these sections to avoid repetition about the Bimah and Ark

Images and Media

- needs to put some in to show the artistic features they are describing

Overal Impressions

- overall great article with really in depth improvements, but it needs sources cited, photos for reference if possible, and a new lead