User:Marperch/Italian Synagogue (Venice)/Seanjh1 Peer Review

General info
Marperch
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Marperch/Italian Synagogue (Venice)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Italian Synagogue (Venice)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Adding a section for the exterior of the building is a great idea, but I think it needs to be more fleshed out. For example, what is the significance of the baroque dome and arched windows?

For the interior, you add a lot of great information that brings a lot to the article. I might change your style of writing for the last paragraph where it says "As one ascends the pulpit stairs, they encounter decorative banisters with a crossed arch motif, a design reminiscent of 18th-century Venetian furniture." because to me this doesn't sound like the tone a Wikipedia article usually uses.

I would also add a sentence to the lead that gives a brief overview of the article and outline.