User:Marrayaco/Vegan cheese/GMT2020UPRC Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I will be reviewing the work of the user: Marrayaco


 * Link to draft you're reviewing

User:Marrayaco/Vegan cheese

Lead evaluation

 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

The artcle has a very good introductory sentence explaining what is vegan cheese and it also has sources in words just in case you don´t know what it is about.


 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

The lead isn´t overly detailed. It has 4 sentences explaining what is vegan cheese and where it coes from, wich I find it very good.

Content evaluation

 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

The part of Contents doesn´t need to be include because as soon as you enter the article, it has its own section where you can see the content of the article. It also has things i the headings that they shouldn´t be there, and it´s the (edit) because it already has a section apart where you can´t see while editing.

Tone and Balance evaluation

 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References evaluation

 * Check a few links. Do they work?

I could see 2 of 3 sources but I ony found one as a reliable source, because the other one is more like a blog.

Organization evaluation
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?

It is well-written and easy to read. It explians everything at the point wich i found amazing.


 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?

It has a few spelling erros and it could be written in a better way.

Images and Media Evaluation

 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?

It doesn´t have pictures in the article, but it would be interesting to see some vegan cheese in the article.

Overall evaluation

 * How can the content added be improved?

It has a little bit of plagarism but you still have time to fix it, I believe in you!