User:Marshfrancis14/David Keightley/Jacob.brown00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marshfrancis14


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marshfrancis14/David_Keightley?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead does a great job at explaining what the topic is about, but maybe it would be good to add what the topics that will be discussed later on in the page. I think the body part of the article is well structured with the sections all having a good start. I think the career works and life could be put into more detail. The sources are lined up properly in alphabetical order, but I would add a few more sources because it would help to find new information on your topic.I also think that the variety of sources used so far is very good. Overall I think the article is looking good. I think the strength of this article is the body information. I think the biggest weakness is the lead being a little short and having a limited number of references.