User:Marslyc/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Petroleum industry in Iran

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I think this article explains what oil means to Iran, and our subject requirements are related to oil

Evaluate the article
The introduction briefly introduces the importance of Iran’s oil industry, the proportion of these industries in the world and the impact on Iran’s economy.

The article first introduces the history of Iran's oil industry, which is divided into two stages, the international era and the nationalization era. The second part of the article introduces Iran's oil production and reserves and uses a lot of citations. But I noticed that regarding the part of oil reserves and production, there are some data sources that need to be cited.

I did not notice the grammatical errors in the article, but I think the layout of the article needs improvement. In the part of oil reserves, the large amount of data is dazzling. I think it can be made into a table to make it easier for people to read.

The pictures added in the article are a good interpretation of the part of the data. I can directly understand Iran’s oil production and import and export data in various years.

I think this article is generally good. It introduces some detailed data on the composition of Iran’s oil industry. The only shortcoming is that some places are not cited, and the cited articles are relatively old.